You wrote this long ago, but I came across it today because I wanted to send an Anniversary Review!
Thank Mew so much for sharing this poem! You had me grinning throughout. You describe your kitty's actions in detail, and I love the Verse about the laundry best. It's lovely how you say your kitten taught you so much about life, and the last line is great!
Suggestion:
I'd suggest you use WritingML like font, size, line-spacing and centering.
Also - since you love this kitty and seem to be a 'cat' person, I'd like to see a poem or essay from you addressing the point the 'dog' people bring up -- that dogs are faithful whereas cats are only self-serving. I'm sure you'll be able to make a good case for the felines!
And as an aside, have you read Paul Gallico's 'Silent Miao'?
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