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 |  | Furry Philosophy  [E] "If there is only one tiny square of sunshine in the house..."  |
| (5.0)  Mew!  You wrote this long ago, but I came across it today because I wanted to send an Anniversary Review!  Thank Mew so much for sharing this poem! You had me grinning throughout. You describe your kitty's actions in detail, and I love the Verse about the laundry best. It's lovely how you say your kitten taught you so much about life, and the last line is great! Suggestion: I'd suggest you use WritingML like font, size, line-spacing and centering. Also - since you love this kitty and seem to be a 'cat' person, I'd like to see a poem or essay from you addressing the point the 'dog' people bring up -- that dogs are faithful whereas cats are only self-serving. I'm sure you'll be able to make a good case for the felines! And as an aside, have you read Paul Gallico's 'Silent Miao'? Thanks for sharing! Write On! - Sonali  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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