The title works. Maybe you'd like to look at the genres and brief description again, and update these.
I like the blue colour of the font.
The poem basically paints a bleak picture of winter. The images are evocative and the emotion comes through.
About the repeated words / phrases
I understand the repeated lines for effect.
However, I found some of the repeated words (or similar words) to be distracting. (Ice / icy, 'cold' in two different lines). I wished you had put a synonym there instead.
About the last verse
The rest of the poem is purely bleak.
You suddenly give a glimpse of a milder winter in the last line.
Somehow, this didn't feel complete.
I think the poem would have more impact if it were all-bleak, or longer with the milder aspect developed more, too.
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