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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This poem tells a beautiful story. That the little girl can see what she is describing is believable. Children are visual. I like the idea of a cow nuzzling the newborn. She makes connections with the halo in a picture book to the halos from the church candles...beautiful imagery. Thanks for the wonderful read.
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