Hallo! This one showed up on 'read and review'. The title, brief description and genres work perfectly. Maybe you'd like to add a cover picture.
I enjoyed the poem. While the theme is universal, your approach to it has a unique touch. The feelings are completely relatable and the tone is just right for the emotions expressed.
The line about your heart wrapped in her sleeve brought a smile!
My only suggestion would be for WritingML - font, size, line space and center. Maybe italics.
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