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 The Soul of Society  [ASR]
Celebrating Children
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review by Polter-JACE
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating . Hello. I found your offering in the Read & Review section. I don't review every item from this section, but yours caught my interest.

I'm Polter-JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "The Soul of Society" .

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I guess there will always be some aspect of our lives that need our attention. Children are our future and should garner the lion's share of that attention.

I've raised four wonderful children so will always have a special place for children's needs. Reading your essay, I was struck by the fact that there are only two special days set aside for children ... out of 365 in a year. The need seems overwhelming.

You mention UNICEF briefly. I actually looked up the acronym (cuz I'm like that)--United Nations International Children's Emergency Fund. UNICEF was established right after WW II in 1946. So it's a long lasting program.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* I found no issues with the writing mechanics of your essay    

*Star* My Rating.  4.5. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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