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 Carrying the water Open in new Window. [E]
A short poem
by inkerod Author Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I cannot fathom such a hard life, always walking and struggling to carry water great distances. "Their footprints cover the world." What a powerful line. Yes, most of us take our lives and water for granted. Indeed "their lives are not so enchanted."
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