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I read this poetry carefully. An ideal traditional Haiku should maintain a 5-7-5 syllable scheme. However, I observe that the syllable scheme does not follow in each poem. In present days, we often see that the syllable pattern is always not pursued. So, we may ignore that fault but it cannot be a traditional Japanese Haiku.
Every Haiku only deals with nature. Here, nature means mother nature. The prime purpose is nothing but to draw an image of nature.
In this poetry, the poet deals with human nature which denies the characteristics of Haiku. The image is not perfectly constructed always. So it does not belong to the Haiku category.
The section which deals with the human mind is known as Japanese Senryu.
So, it can be Senryu though some adjustments are needed.


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