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I Write - Decade Edition - Roaring 20's Open in new Window. [E]
Poems and prose for various contests over the course of the decade.
by 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Something Is Wrong Here" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "I Write - Decade Edition - Roaring 20's" Open in new Window. "Something Is Wrong Here" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the lights not coming on. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first person point of view and voice are good choices for this story because they reveal the speaker's emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

Write on!


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