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 A Fool’s Path: Trust is a Bust! Open in new Window. [E]
Blame it on the nature of the game - stay positive - and make an adjustment - a nice poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a playground another classic creation by the poet. The poet is an experienced person. Those experiences make him confident. He tries hard to flow those conferences in our minds.
He compares our lives with a playground. We may be on the back foot. That does not mean that there is no way to recover again. Our life calling us. So we should respect that call. First, we need to find our faults. Then we repaired those and regrouped again to achieve the goal. Now we will be the winner.
This is the poem to boost us for the bigger possibility. This is the poem that inspires us to think positively.
Ultimately this is the poem that shows us the proper direction in our life. Therefore, we remain grateful to the poet for this beautiful poem.

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