I'm JACE, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "She's a Thief" in honor of your WDC anniversary.
I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.
Overall Impression. Great job with your poem. I selected your offering because of your title. I had to know more.
I don't often review poetry, especially free form, as I usually don't understand it. I appreciate your use of rhyme and meter. It was easy to read. I also found your humor to be refreshing. Great ending; I didn't expect that.
Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.
I found no issues with the mechanics of your writing. Well done.
My Rating. 5.0.
Thank you for sharing this offering, and I look forward to seeing you around in the coming year. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.
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