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 A Big Mess - A Tragic Fealty Open in new Window. [E]
The earth clearly needs to rectify injustice, and restore pride and peace - a poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is another beautiful piece of poetry that was written by this poet. Though we can see in discipline here and there, everywhere. Is there no hope? It is not possible. Even now, we can detect those faults. This is the only ray of confidence.
Now we have to regroup first. Then identify those faults. Then start to process of rectification. It is a tough task but not impossible. But, it may move slowly, too. Keep your patience. If you maintain your calmness, one day you must rectify injustice, and restore pride and peace.
This is simply wonderful poetry which can inspire us to think positively. I hope that you will also contribute to making strong global foundations in future.

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