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Review of Evening Call  Open in new Window.
Review by JACE Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi The Dark Faery Author Icon. I found your offering in the Read & Review section.

I'm JACE Author Icon, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Invalid Item" Open in new Window..

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. While your piece is a short, yet delightful read, I'm not sure how your title fits with the substance of the poem. Evening is not the same as night.

You cite a form, but I don't recognize it. Perhaps you might explain how the form works. Of course, without that knowledge I can't speak to whether the form was followed.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* I found no problems with the mechanics of your poem.    

*Star* My Rating.  4.0.  An above average offering that requires a little more clarification.

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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