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A beautiful little story about a girl going for a hike to appreciate God's creation. I like how you included a variety of different animals: the birds, squirrels and even a sleeping fox. It adds to the atmosphere and helps us picture the scenery without using too many words to describe what everyone understands.

When she climbs into the tree and watches the eggs hatching, I'm wondering where the mother bird is and hoping Janet is keeping a safe distance from the nest. Birds are sensitive to intruders and her presence would disrupt their natural routines.

I know it's a very brief and simple tale, but I wonder what region she lives in where wolves roam free. And if the wolf pup was injured I might think the rest of the pack would come looking for it and bring it food, though I don't know for sure. It's been a long time since I read White Fang.

I love the Bible quotes you've included, and I like how you centered their text blocks. It appears you left the default font size, though on mobile I'm uncertain. I would recommend using a larger size font because on desktop, default font size is quite small and creates a cramped and "boring" feeling. For my own work I prefer size 3.5 or 4. The larger size makes an engaging read and is easier for the elderly and those with poor eyesight to enjoy.

You may want to add a note at the end for your own reference, of which contest you wrote it for, the prompt and word count. You can use a dropnote ▼ to keep it tidy and professional.

Thanks for sharing and keep writing

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