Season’s greetings,

I enjoyed reading this upbeat little poem about chocolate. It conveys your feelings about the food in question with unmistakable clarity and slightly exaggerated humor. The rhyming of “chocoholic” and “frolic” is creative.

Your detailed explanation of which poetic form you’ve chosen is helpful and greatly appreciated. I never pay much attention to syllable counts and structures myself, and it’s always good to be able to see how it’s done.

I would recommend adding two standard genres for the item, maybe “entertainment” and “personal”. They don’t have to be an exact match.

Thanks for sharing. Now I have a hankering for chocolate
Take care and keep writing

"The WDC Angel Army" 

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