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| (4.5)    HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY!!! from "Anniversary Reviews"  Celebrating your writing this month with a review. Happy Account Anniversary Stormy Lady  ,I’m on a review raid of your portfolio, acknowledging your 23 years at WDC. In "One Single Tear," the poet explores the profound emotion of fear encapsulated in a tear. The opening lines immediately set a contemplative tone, inviting readers to delve into introspection. The repetition of "one single tear" serves as a poignant refrain, emphasizing the singular focus of the poem and underlining the significance of the tear as a symbolic manifestation of fear. Stylistically, the poem adopts a straightforward and unembellished approach, allowing the raw emotions to resonate. The short, concise lines contribute to the overall impact, creating a sense of immediacy and intensity. The use of rhyme, particularly in "fear" and "here," adds a musical quality to the verses, enhancing the emotional resonance. Thematically, your poem considers the complexities of emotions, particularly the transformation from love to sorrow. The contrast between the past and the present is vividly portrayed through the juxtaposition of nostalgic images like "watching the birds above" with the current state of sadness. This progression unfolds organically, providing a nuanced exploration of the speaker's emotional landscape. Poetic devices such as personification are subtly woven into your narrative, as evidenced in "Watching the birds above." This technique imbues nature with the ability to witness and bear witness to the speaker's emotional journey. The cloud imagery further adds depth, symbolizing the passage of time and the emotional storms faced by the speaker. Suggestions for improvement could include expanding on specific details or moments that contribute to the emotional narrative. For instance, providing more concrete examples of the love that once existed could enrich the reader's connection to the speaker's experience. You write symbolically of these feelings. Getting closer to subject could really make an emotive expression come alive. A pleasure to read you and know your work a little better, during your anniversary month here. Sincerely, Brian WDC Angel Army and Anniversary Reviewer   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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