This happens to more than you cowboy from NJ and told in such a fine choice of words. I enjoyed this read so much I read it over twice and found great rhythm and imagery bound with great end words in your choice of rhyme. When I read a poem of this scheme I not syllable count and you have a 6 or 7 count in the lines I think. Years of writing this kind of poetry I don't have to actually count to know you are a natural. No errors noted