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 A Girl I Love at School Open in new Window. [E]
A personal poem about myself in love with a girl at highschool
by ~~Mc Young~~ Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is simply a great rhyming poem. It raises a big issue. In our teenage, it may be in our high school life, or our college life, we generally involve in a love relationship. Some of them prosper but not all. We want every love relationship, whether it is real or unconditional, should have a sweet end. Unfortunately, it does not happen on every occasion. We often observe sad ends, but we can not find any fault on either side. The poetry is based on that kind of unfortunate matter.
The narrator is a boy who reads in a high school. He loves his classmate who is a beautiful teenage girl of his age. He can not express his love to her. So, real love can not be prosperous as a result.
That sad experience teaches us an important lesson in our lives. That is none other than expressing yourself to that human whom you love, otherwise, that will not be fulfilled.
That is a very vital lesson. We shall remain grateful to the poet for the poetry.
Write on!

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