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Review #4721726
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Autumn Open in new Window. [E]
Handprints of autumn.
by An apple a day.... Author Icon
Review of Autumn  Open in new Window.
Review by JACE Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi An apple a day.... Author Icon }.

I'm JACE Author Icon, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Autumn" Open in new Window..

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I found your item in the Read & Review section, and it appealed to my infatuation with form poetry.

I can find no fault with your offering. Your topic is Autumn, and the use of color, the supporting picture and the leaf emoticons all speak to the theme perfectly.

I also appreciate including the form requirements for your poem. I've never used that form before. Perhaps soon....

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* Nothing of note to include in this area. Well done.    

*Star* My Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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JACE

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