Hello Joey,

"On the Other Side" is beautifully crafted, how love transcends physical distances, incorporating elements of nature and celestial to convey a deep emotional connection. The style is contemplative and romantic, evoking yearning and devotion. The theme of enduring love across vast distances is interwoven with vivid imagery, creating a narrative that should resonate with readers.

The form is structured, utilizing well-defined stanzas to guide through the speaker's emotional journey. Each stanza contributes to gradual revelation of the feelings, mirroring the unfolding layers of love. The use of rhyme, such as in "dreams" and "seams," adds a musical quality to the verses, enhancing the overall rhythmic flow. This rhythmic consistency contributes to the poem's soothing and contemplative atmosphere.

Poetic devices are employed with finesse to enhance the emotional impact. The metaphorical use of the Atlantic Ocean as a metaphor for the physical separation between the speaker and their beloved is particularly poignant. The line "Miles apart, yet close in dreams and thoughts" encapsulates the central theme, emphasizing the power of love to bridge geographical distances through shared dreams and thoughts. The comparison of the beloved's laughter to a melody in the ocean's song adds a sensory layer to the poem, invoking aural and visual imagery that deepens the reader's connection to the emotions conveyed.

Rich in its exploration of love, further exploring the personal reflections on the challenges and triumphs of a long-distance relationship could further the impact of this poem. Delving into specific moments or memories shared across the Atlantic could add a more intimate dimension, allowing one to connect on a more personal level. For instance, expanding on the metaphor of the lighthouse beacon and the anchor could create additional layers with symbolism, offering insights into the emotional resilience and commitment.

Your poem's closing lines beautifully capture the essence of enduring love, emphasizing voice of this unwavering devotion. To enhance the emotional resonance, experimenting with varying line lengths or incorporating enjambment in the final stanza could add dimension. This can create a sense of fluidity, mirroring the boundless nature of the depicted love.

In consideration, "On the Other Side" is a heartfelt exploration of love's ability to transcend physical distances. Its contemplative style, vivid imagery, and effective use of poetic devices contribute to a poignant and resonant narrative. And, with subtle adjustments to rhythm and exploration of more specific moments, your poem has the potential to deepen its emotional impact. A pleasure once again to view and offer my thoughts.

Sincerely,

Brian

WDC Angel Army Reviewer



Contemplator of all things big, small, non-existent and interdimensional

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