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It is an adventure storybook. In an adventure story, the main character always remains ready to handle unknown dangers. So that prime character must be fearless. The story must be full of suspense. The mysterious atmosphere always remains intact. So dark phases can be seen so often. Though the suspense plays the prime part in this pattern of story, it should connected with our fundamentals. So, a society-oriented story structure is expected. But, nowadays, we inject science fiction as a major role that needs tremendous efficiency. Now, we must see how the story can make a perfect connection with science fiction.
Here the main character is Korga. He is in a dense jungle. He is very much aware of the forest's danger. He will go to the Ragnar territories. That will not be easy to survive. So, a lot of adverse situations will be waiting for us.
The first chapter is nothing but a preface before the main story. That chapter shows us how brave, cautious and wise Korga is.
That set the tone of the story.
But it is full of suspense and very much interesting in the true sense. The primary aim of this part is how courageous Korga is but it also shows how careful he is. This wisdom and braveness make him a superpower. The future story will be dependent on this fact.
Overall, a very attractive story is coming up. I wait eagerly for the next chapter.

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