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 | Forgetting Things I Can't Remember  [E] A poem about grieving  |
| (5.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  Hi Wilderness Dude .I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Forgetting Things I Can't Remember" in honor of your WDC anniversary. I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.  Overall Impression. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your offering, despite the sad reason for its existence. Grief can be a paralyzing emotion, even tougher to find one's way forward.I find as I approach 70 years of age, I can scarcely think of anyone I know that has not experienced such grief. Thank you for sharing.  Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc. I noted no obvious spelling or punctuation errors. Of course, such poetic forms allows great latitude in formatting.  My Rating. 5.0 . Great job. Thank you for sharing this offering, and I look forward to seeing you around in the coming year. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.Reviewed by JACE  ![A new Anniversary Review signature to use, courtesy of [Link To User legerdemain]](https://www.writing.com/main/images/action/display/ver/1349548281/item_id/1893180.jpg "Anniversary Reviews Image1 [#1893180]
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