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 A Woman with Breast Cancer Open in new Window. [E]
Poetry to inspire and uplift the Breast Cancer communities around the world
by Yipsy Quibble Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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The poetry starts by creating interest. What will happen next? They are ready to read a classic poem But, the story remains untold. That is a big mistake. I think that you forget to add that particular part. Please, edit it and enlarge the poetry with unwritten parts. Otherwise, promising literature will remain unpublished.
Like you, I also inspire and uplift Breast Cancer communities around whole world.

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