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 Deep Sea Diving Adventure Open in new Window. [E]
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by WriterRick Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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An uplifting piece, likening the dark depths of the sea to the lowest points of our own lives, with the heartening conclusion that, even in the darkest moments, there is beauty and goodness possible.

In this it succeeds very well - the piece is well written without errors and flows steadily and logically to its goal. The one doubt I have is that it does not describe how the descent into the abyss is made. That sort of depth is impossible with aqualungs so it must involve some sort of deep sea submersible. I think the question needs to be dealt with at the outset (just a quick description is all that's needed) to prevent any confusion arising in the reader's mind.

Apart from that, this is a fine piece and a most enjoyable read.

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