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 Another Joke? Open in new Window. [13+]
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by Winchester Jones Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Interesting characters, interesting bar room, amusing story. Of course, I wonder what the punchline was going to be but there probably wasn't one at all. And it doesn't matter as much as I thought it would. The piece is interesting enough in its own right.

What does matter is that the reader's attention is held right up to the end and that means the writing was good. All that remains is presentation and here I see we have an outbreak of the dreaded Others disease. At the very least, you should put down Humour as one of the genres. There's no lie in that and you won't be giving anything away in it. Add a couple more even vaguely appropriate genres and you should increase your readership threefold. At least, theoretically.

Anyway, I enjoyed it and I'm the reviewer, so what I say goes!

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