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A Long Trip Open in new Window. [E]
Daily Flash Fiction 8/7/21 W/C 300
by QueenNormaJean snow finally!!! Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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If you invent a land, then it is yours to command! And here we have a story with that old fashioned thing, a moral, tacked on at the end. Nothing wrong in that - indeed, it's a pity we don't attend to such things more often. Much of the fare we're fed these days is the very opposite of moral.

But, to the story! It's a simple enough thing, with one character wanting to dream and the other wanting to sleep. A situation that finds its solution by satisfying both needs in dreaming while asleep. The writing is straightforward, dialogue is natural and unforced, and everything trundles along merrily to its conclusion. I can't fault it, although I might have chosen Fantasy instead of Experience as one of the three genres allowed in the header. Otherwise, I'm thinking that this actually happened and that might be a wrong tack entirely!

But it's an excellent little story that gets its point across most effectively.

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