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 "Come with Me" Open in new Window. [E]
A brief getaway for the mind with a chance to get to see her.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A wonderful descriptive piece.
Her beauty unfurls with each sentence.
Picture perfect beauty, who invites the author (perhaps) to share the blessings of life.
Dream girl comes to life.

Imagery is visual and I can see her before my mind's eye.


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"You're heart, stolen by the smile."
(Your heart, stolen by the smile.)

"... lips glistening with the sun."
( lips glistening in the sun.)

Just my thoughts.

Write on!
The colorful glory of sunrise.

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