Hi Jackie
I love your story with a lesson taught using her daughter's intellect to reach the right conclusion. Very nicely done, and the text in bold (which I am guessing was a prompt) fits in there so seamlessly, without dominating the story overall.

When trying to find a recommendation, there really isn't anything I see needing correction. Its a beautiful flowing and well-written tale.

The only possible thing was your use of the word nibble twice in regard to the biscuits. Perhaps because we don't see nibble used very often, it stood out, and the second use of the word made a bit too big an impression via the repetition. I felt a wish that the mom had taken a proper bite of that gingerbread!

Your story made me smile, while also a little hungry.


Hope