You created a nice visual with the words. I noticed that as the situation changed so did the configuration of the sentences.

The end of your story had a great impact on me because you mentioned tears of sadness and then you mentioned tears of gladness. I'm very glad your mom has family members she knows now. This is an uplifting story. It is sad at first but, the ending is fantastic. I could feel and visualize these events.

Would you please consider changing [contest entry] to a different genre so that potential readers can find your poem story more easily?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .