You retold the story of the prodigal son very well because of the elements included, the placement and choces of the words, and the rhythm. I enjoyed the repetitions because they brought forth the intensity of the hatrid which caused sadness within me. This sadness became gladness because I know the rest of the story.

Two genres that could work for your story are [cultural] because it is based on the biblical culture, and [dark} because hating one's brother is a kind of darkness. Some other genres might fit. Adding specific genres helps bring your stories to the attention of potential readers.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .