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Hi noblankpage,

Welcome back to Writing.Com! *Smile*

Overall Impression:

It's always nice to see people return to the site. I have had my own breaks, but I always return because this is such a warm, welcoming community filled with inspiration. You will be happy to know that that hasn't changed! There are still lots of contests and activities and there are plenty of good people who will no doubt welcome and encourage you.

I am not certain if I used to know you, nor how long you have been gone. There are quite a few people around who have been here for many a year, so I hope you'll find your old friends. I recommend making a post on the newsfeed - that way people will know of your return. The community newsfeed is also a good way of seeing what's going on and who's around.

I look forward to reading your work!

Suggestions:

I do have a few suggestions, dear author. I hope that you'll find them helpful!

Paragraph 1:

*Snow2* print out references

I think that 'print out' should be print-out.

*Snow2* post it notes

'post it' should be post-it.

Paragraph 2:

*Snow2* ...golden years, I find...

I would end the first sentence after 'years', and begin a new one with 'I'.

Some 'Welcome Back' Suggestions:

I don't know if you prefer to write poetry, short stories or other types of items. "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window. [13+] welcomes both poetry and stories. "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Open in new Window. [13+] is great for those bursts of inspiration. Over the longer term, it's well worth joining "The Contest Challenge" Open in new Window. [13+]. By participating in just one of the listed contests each month you can earn some major prizes! Also, as you mentioned being in your golden years, you may be interested in the "Senior Center Forum" Open in new Window. [ASR]. They have a monthly contest, too. *Smile*

My Rating:

It's been nice to see your return to the site. I enjoyed saying hi!

I did have a few little suggestions, but nothing major. Therefore, I will give this item a rating of 4.5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work.

Write on!

Kit

A dragon reading a book by candle light


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