I love the way you say, "I feel fine" despite going through trying times. Few would keep such brave front.

Hello, I am Jaya and I am reviewing this well-written poem for your WDC Account Anniversary!
Congratulations and have a lovely day!

You depicted life in vivid word pictures.

"I paint this picture upon this page
But the words are fading as they age"

Everyone passes through some difficult patches in life. While some succumb to such circumstances beyond strength, some survive all of them and rise from the thorns of life.
You obviously, belong to the second type of humanity.

My only suggestion is,

separate the rhyming couplets.
That will certainly make the poem more appealing.

It flows well with appropriate word choices and line endings.

Write on!


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .