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Review #4713468
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 To the one I love Open in new Window. [E]
This is a set of two poems dedicated to the person I love. To you in all sincerity.
by Urja Agarwal Author Icon
Review of To the one I love  Open in new Window.
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Urja is a Hindi word. That means energy, more specifically the inner strength.
The poet is using that energy beautifully in self-writing. It is a fantastic experience to see these types of mature poetries from a newbie author. I must appreciate it.
The narrator tells us about love in-depth especially from her side. She was involved in a relationship with TK and expected the same from the other side, too. Overall, it is a beautiful experience to read these types of poems.
But I find an error in type selection. It would be in-type poetry but not a letter/memo type. Please, rectify that.
I have a suggestion, too. You can create a series with the teller affairs with TK. Various shades can be shared. That will be very interesting.

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