Hi,

in this poem, faith is voiced well, a bit different from the usual way.

I am reviewing this short but strong verse for your WDC Account Anniversary.
Congratulations!

Have a wonderful day.

The devil is given the task of getting the believer out of the safe net of the Savior. Wow! what a thought!

It is a foregone conclusion that evil cannot separate the devotee from God.

Imagery is visual and the flow is fine too.


Just a few edits if you are okay with them.

"The devil he dont want me here, guess Im in his way."

(The devil, he won't want me here, guess I'm in his way.)


"Saviors name."

(Savior's name.)

" have fell on fertile ground."
( have fallen on fertile ground.
or fell on the fertile ground)

"I really dont know just what it is, but he cant bring me down.'

(I really don't know just what it is, but he can't bring me down.)

"Im strapped in the good Lords armor, that gives the devil fits,"

(I'm strapped in the good Lord's armor, that gives the devil fits,)

With best wishes,

Write on!



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