Aww, this is so sweet and carries a lot of depth. The two babies are like us, wondering about what they do not know. The concepts of faith and skepticism in the mouths of preborn children is a wonderful idea and a charming way to convey your theme.

I would suggest changing the three genres to ones specific to what you've written so people can find your work. "Spiritual," "religious" and"philosophical" might be three that you can choose instead.

Thank you for sharing this with us. Take care



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