Your poem shows emotion very well. I could visualize a demon and a person fighting for supremacy. The person who wants to be free of the demon and the demon wanting to have control over the person. I hope the person wins this battle.

A demon that have to bid? I'm not sure is what you meant. Did you mean ?

To help readers find your poem you could add [emotional] because it does show emotions in your words and it also stirs emotions within the reader. [Tragedy] could work with this poem because it is tragic for someone to go through these challenging things.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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