This is quite an adventure into the world of theater. I wonder what happened after Darlene was discovered by Dom Juan? Did he throw her out or get to know her?

Another genre that would fit this story would be thriller/suspense because the snooping around apparently alone could at any time become a discovery of the character who is snooping. The reaction of the person, who makes this discovery, could have varied emotions and reactions. This is great suspense.

Showing more emotions through the character's inward and outward reactions would help readers know more about them and care about them. Readers who have a vested interest in the characters most likely will continue reading the story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .