I chuckled at the being in jail part of your poem, many thanks. I could visualize the adventure, antics, and tail lights. Characters are interesting and believable. It seems adventure and partying is the thing. I enjoyed reading about the actions of chill playing on the cheek and the idea of a pail bark. When I read about the bark, I thought about a dog. I enjoy nature and adventures and your poem presented both which kept me wanting ti read.

Adding action/adventure or drama for example to replace contest entry would help potential readers find your poem.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .