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| (4.0)| Hello Barbara Swihart Miller  This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with.   This is a cute kid's story. It kept me interested throughout. Title and Description - Good, strong title. It's sure to draw especially kid's attention, and the description will urge them to read on. Theme/Subject Matter:- A Spaceman meets a silly spaceman who looks just like him. Even though the spaceman is silly and fun, he's also sad, because he lives all alone. Characters - Your characters are well-rounded. The reader easily gets to know them as they read. Originality/Creativity:- A very original story with a creative twist. Setting - I think a few sentences scattered throughout the story to give an idea of what the setting was like, would have helped the reader visualize the story a bit easier. Emotion/Impact: - A cute story for kids, leaves a feel-good feeling after reading. My Suggestions - space manspaceman  handle bars,handlebars  covetingcovering alone here."alone here,"  Summary: Thanks so much for sharing your story with us. KEEP ON WRITING ON!  Intuey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/21/2023 @ 9:12am EDT