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Dennis Open in new Window. [E]
Flash Fiction - 5-20-20. W/C 149
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I guess Bill might be in someone else's doghouse. I could hear and see the characters as they discussed Dennis. Of course with that name, who knows what else will happen.

To expand this story should you choose to do so, you could write about possible solutions for curbing Dennise's chewing adventure. Perhaps suggesting a crate that would keep him safe and secure. Chew toys and bones that are dog-safe. Going for walks. Playing with the dog.

You could change [other] to action/adventure because there is a lot of chewing going on and other doggie and human interactions/responses. Family because the dog is often considered a family member.

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