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If I could go back in time   [E]
Writers Cramp Prompt: going back in time
by H❀pe
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a good story about taking revenge. Though twenty-five years passed away. Even after that long gap, she is always waiting for the opportune moment to the Howard. Though his friend Andrew is cautious of him in time, Howard does not care. It sends us a very crucial message. If you do anything unfair, you have to pay heavily either today or tomorrow but crime must not remain unpaid.
It is a compact short story. Only three characters are there. The pace is smooth and always going toward the end. The suspense gives a fantastic readability.
My suggestion is to always stick to basics like this one. A bright future is waiting for you.

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