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| (3.0)| Hello Leeboi  This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with.   Interesting story. I thought it was going to end up being a dream. Title and Description - Good title. It caught my attention and your description urged me to read on. Theme/Subject Matter:- A man out for the night has some strange things happening around him. What could be the cause? Characters - I think a couple of paragraphs describing a little about the main character would help the reader relate a bit better. Originality/Creativity:- An original story with a very creative endinf. Setting - A few lines of the setting the main character is in can help bring the reader into the story. Emotion/Impact: - Quirky humor. My Suggestions - I'd change the 'Environment' genre to maybe 'Drama'. It may help draw more readers in, as many look for items to read using the genre categories. clear lit clear-lit  embarrassed of. embarrassed by.  long overgrown long-overgrown  Summary: Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us. KEEP ON WRITING ON!  Intuey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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