In the first paragraph there's a typo: The news casters - newscasters

There are a few spots where there are repeated words, so it would be good to switch up the words to keep it fresh. For instance in this sentence, the double wording of look: He turned back around to look at me. The look And here, with the wording of felt/feel I knew he was right, but it all felt so real when someone’s life had to be taken. I didn’t feel... Also, you might want to tighten up the number of the word 'was'.

Typo: An hour had gone by while a couple of detectives shown up to talk showed

Typo: If he died than did that save... then