I enjoyed viewing through your words the scene and the characters as they met after a very long absence. Telling as needed and showing the emotions made the characters and plot real to me and I wanted to read every word. You caused emotions to flow through me along with showing those of the characters. Especially the sudden drop and sadness as it was revealed they would never or so it seems be together. I could feel the emptiness alongside the characters as they face the future separately while the past lingers in their minds. This is a nicely written story of love once theirs yet time separated it from them, well done.

I noticed you could add more genres to your story so that people can find it easier and enjoy reading it by using emotional because of the emotions of the characters and the emotions this story evokes within the reader, drama because it is dramatic being in love and then having to continue life without that special person, tragedy possibly because it is awful dealing with this kind of experience, and perhaps a few others.

Did you know with no restrictions about who is able to read your story that some publishers consider it published? This could mean that if you wanted to publish it, it might be more challenging or not published. I suggest that you change this access to WdC members only just in case you decide to publish this story.

I look forward to reading more of your stories. Write with might for reader's delight.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .