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 The Joke is on you Lucifer Open in new Window. [E]
faith in all of us will grow like a tree because its roots are what holds it down
by gageblackwood Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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}As a poem, I must appreciate the selection of the subject. It is indeed brilliant. What can faith do in our life? Faith in all of us will help us to grow like a tree because its roots are what hold it down.

A few may tell you to reduce the length. But, in my opinion, the size does not matter much.
You can express those which you want to address. But, I have seen a few times, that the pace is compromised we can not expect a promising poet of your calibre. I suggest you be careful about this type of fault for the future.
Except for this, the overall performance is good.
Keep writing.


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