I think the concept of bickering reindeers and getting a glimpse into their private interactions is a wonderful idea for a script. I also got a kick out of "put a hoof" in it, Rudolph. That was clever.

Warning: Delicate content follows. Based on the rest of my reaction, I'm not your target market. I appreciate humor and sarcasm but, imho, the piece lacks balance. The ongoing vituperous exchange between the reindeer hurt my little Christmas, reindeer loving heart. I prefer to imagine the herd doing the Reindeer Boogie,"limbering their legs and getting ready to spread Christmas cheer." That said, even the best of siblings "have their moments." I think I would have appreciated it and written a different review if it wasn't an all-out cap-fest and there was more balance in the interaction.

That said, I think the overall concept invites room to play.

Write and Live Passionately,
Cyndee

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .