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 | A Medal for Sven  [13+] When a little girl teaches Sven three magical words--how many are saved?  |
| (4.5)| Hello Joto-Kai This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with.   What a sweet story with such an amazing message! You had a strong beginning that hooked me. The story kept me interested throughout, and I truly enjoyed the ending. Nice job!  Title and Description - Great title that's to the point. A good description that urged me to read on. Theme/Subject Matter:- The story shows that one doesn't have to be a sword-wielding warrior to be a hero. We're all heroes in our own special way. We need to just let our light shine to offer our own unique gifts.   Characters - Very strong main character. I was able to visualize and get to know him well. Originality/Creativity:- Nice original story with a creative storyline. Setting - Good use of setting that allowed this reader to envision each scene as I read along with the story. Emotion/Impact: - A 'feel good' kind of story. My Suggestions - any of them, wishedany of them, and wished  They welcomed him,No comma needed.  abide intruders abide by intruders gripped the handle,No comma needed.  He nodded, as ifNo comma needed.  star-burning-tip star-burning tip etched in gold are etched in gold  ran back where they came.ran back to where they came from. My Favorite Part: - The part where Sven helps the little girl and the ending. Fabulous finish.Summary: I truly enjoyed reading your story. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. KEEP ON WRITING ON! Intuey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/16/2023 @ 5:29am EDT