Hi, thank you so much for sharing. I found this little story written so long ago, 2003 in fact when WdC was in its infancy. I know how you feel at the thought of losing our favourite writing site. I would be lost, wouldn’t know what to do with myself. I realise I’m a borderline addict come to think of it!
I loved the line: The ground heaves suddenly, angrily, tossing pets and bikes and sprinklers like popcorn in a sizzling pan. That was a great image.
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Your descriptions of a world spinning out of control were colourful and imaginative. Thank you.
Sue

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