Hi Sharmelle,

I came across this unusual poem in a Newsletter of this week.

It is about the electric glow emanating from passion and happy emotions. It is a rather novel usage for me.

"Your electric glow is exuberant"

You also described the electric glow as a source of motivation.

Imagery is visual and appeals to my mind too. I spent time thinking about it.

There is one word that bothers me.

My doubt-


The very first line has the word "embers" being used as a verb.

"As this embers your glow"

You mean, it feeds the glow or helps the glow. I understand the word "embers" is a noun. It has no verb form.

It is a nicely constructed poem. It flows well.

Write on!



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