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 The Wolf Bond Open in new Window. [E]
A discovery of the heart.
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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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I see it as an entry in a fiction contest. But it is neither a story nor a fiction. It is a description that may be considered as an outline. It has a tremendous potential to be an ideal story or fiction. That may be considered a technical error.

My humble suggestion is to try to rewrite it again. I hope that will be a fantastic story. Please, do not compromise          se with the readability of the story at any stage that will give you a smooth pace.

I hope that we will see a beautiful story shortly.
Enjoy your writing.


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