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 | Realm Rangers  [13+] Experience traveling between two dimensional worlds as different as night and day.  |
| (3.5)| Hello brom21 } This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with.   This was a good and interesting story. I really enjoyed it. With a bit of editing, it will be made even better! Title and Description - Great creative title that drew my attention. The description sounded like this would be an amazing story. It urged me to read on.  Theme/Subject Matter:- It's about a group of travelers called Ralam Rangers that travel between this earth and a dark shadow type earth. When an accident happens on a Realm Ranger's first trip, he takes measures he'll always regret. Characters - Nice job on the characters involved. I was able to get to know the main characters. Originality/Creativity:- A creative story indeed. Great job with originality. Setting - You do an excellent job with setting. I was easily able to visualize each scene as I read and felt what the characters were experiencing. Emotion/Impact: - I could feel the emotions of the characters. I was so surprised by the ending. I felt sadness, disgust and disappointment, but understanding to a degree at the same time. My Suggestions - the means in the means by that lead that led  twelve year oldtwelve-year-old round them is feelsaround them feels “Yes they can."Yes, they can. both Earth’sboth Earths  weapons and weapons, and accompanied with beingaccompanied by being  if I get loss? if I get lost?  transceiver arm band,transceiver armband, sweat to run downsweat running down  looking at tall humanlooking at the tall  to have ben travelingto have been traveling the traveling suits.a traveling suit. Summary: Thank you so much for sharing your interesting story with us. I really enjoyed it. KEEP ON WRITING ON!  Intuey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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